Unspoken Poem by Miranda Lucas

Unspoken

Rating: 4.0


When 'it's' around she doesn't see me.
When 'it's' around she doesn't see anyone...

She gives 'it' her all, and all is what 'it' takes.
In silence... I sit back and watch.

Always 'it' is there, always 'it' is watching.
'I love you' 'it' says, 'I love you too' she says

But... she loves 'it' more than anything, anyone.
They all love 'it' more than anyone, anything.

These words continue unspoken.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miranda Denooyer 18 August 2010

I really like this, it is interesting, it keeps people wondering til the very end and on, such as my self, the 'it' tht everyone loves is the secret, amazing poem :)

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