Darlene Walsh

Gold Star - 5,746 Points (1994 / Philadelphia)

Ur - Poem by Darlene Walsh

You are
my sun, my moon, my stars

You are
the brightness that warms my heart every day

You are
the soft glow that fills my soul

You are
the uncountable points of light that
make my every moment wonderful

You are
my love, my everything

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Ur by Darlene Walsh

  • Bri Edwards Bri Edwards (12/17/2015 9:33:00 PM)

    gee, Darlene aka Darla aka Jennifer,

    you aren‘t talkin’ ‘bout ME, are ya? ? ? nice. BUT a bit too romantic for me.

    my style:


    You Are

    You are the one who polishes my shoes.
    You are the one I most like …..to abuse.
    You’re up all day cleaning and, at night, cooking,
    but, lucky for you, you’re damn good-looking!

    Well, I’ve see better, of that you can be sure,
    including one bitch who had really …… fine fur.
    Yes, you actually remind me (from behind) of a dog,
    but if you don’t stop eating, you’ll look like a hog!


    is that TOO harsh? ok, i WON'T submit it. : ( bri (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 24, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 5, 2014


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