Treasure Island

jibin joseph

(05 dec 1980 / cochin, kerala state, india)


My life was dumb and dull
Used to see in black and white
Then she appeared, my angel
Now rainbows all over my sight

My life turned meaningful
More than that so colourful
She paints my heart
With her brush of love

Now my heart so colourful
Like a million rainbows

(mouth the word COLOURFUL to your ladylove / lover and she / he will solve the riddle for you)


one for each colour of rainbow

Submitted: Tuesday, February 13, 2007
Edited: Friday, January 14, 2011

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  • Lipstick Casanova (3/8/2007 2:43:00 PM)

    It's amazing when you find a Love that can inspire your dull and colorless vision to gain perspective and meaning. This poem makes that very apparent. Very nice poem, Jibin.

    -L.C. (Report) Reply

  • Sandra Fowler (2/13/2007 9:12:00 AM)

    What a beautiful.positive piece! I like your unique style of writing.Jibin.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Andrew mark Wilkinson (2/13/2007 7:59:00 AM)

    The world seems a more colouful place, when your in love... your world a bleaker place when you you have no angel, to show you grace... nice writing jibin (Report) Reply

  • Poornima Kanasen (2/13/2007 7:39:00 AM)


    I enjoyed your poem...Your life turned meaningful because she painted your heart with her brush of love...For me, his smile makes me feel that way too...His smile gives me a new meaning of life everyday..Love, conquering everyone...Nicely written..I will ask my darling to solve the riddle for me, Lol...

    With lots of best wishes,
    K.Poornima... (Report) Reply

  • June30 Tara (2/13/2007 6:52:00 AM)

    This is really colourful....loved this one
    and hey...i solved the riddle....
    love....ammu (Report) Reply

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