Waiting For You Darling Poem by Rini Shibu

Waiting For You Darling

Rating: 4.8


Waiting for you babe
Come to me
Waiting since long
don't prolong
It's so  tiring
Are you coming
Oh my darling
Your voice is echoing
In my ears
And the earring is dangling
by the call
Oh my darling
My lips is singing
Is it shivering
Saying just one word
it's your name
Can you hear it
My eyes are blinking
Is it twitching
Yes something good
to happen
Yes my darling

Monday, December 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: song
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 11 December 2017

A lovely poem Rini... liked it so much

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Robert Murray Smith 05 July 2018

O my darling in song. I can hear it it's prolonged. ++10

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Andy J Hale 01 May 2018

I like this very much.

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saravanan sivasubramanian 18 December 2017

A nice welcome for a new babe best wishes

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Rini Shibu 18 December 2017

Thanks Saravanan...

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The Crow 12 December 2017

I'm sorry Rini but I have an ol' lady, But, I'll put you on the list. Okay? Another Good One Rini

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Memories of Judith as the Crow. So spooky.

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Rini Shibu 13 December 2017

I am sorry John I have an handsome.. Thanks for the comment

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 December 2017

My eyes are blinking Is it twitching Yes something good to happen Quite a love song of a very high pitch that brings rains of hope. Felt inspired to write on this theme soon. 10+++++ Great Rini...bring more clouds. Subhas

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Rini Shibu 11 December 2017

Thanks Subhas.. Looking forward to read from you

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