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Goldy Locks
(9/17/2006 1:29:00 PM) |
this is another one of yours i have enjoyed. not sure if i'm at liberty to comment,
given the caliber of the poets below me, but i esp. like your opening lines & the
buk inser really makes the piece ''wake up.''
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Esther Leclerc
(7/28/2006 9:00:00 AM) |
Besides this being a worthwhile read, I want to let you know that a film about Bukowski (whom I've never read, but will look into) is coming out this year/next. I've forgotten the title... his name isn't in it, but it stars Matt Dillon. Sounds like a good one.
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Max Reif
(10/2/2005 9:38:00 PM) |
I really like the first stanza, first 2 lines are wonderful.
I don't think I completely grasp the last stanza, though it may be my own density.
Your use of language seems generally quite conscious. I like your ending, which is also basically your title. I'm a little foggy on its connection with just what precedes it.
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John Kay
(10/1/2005 3:20:00 AM) |
Lori...this is a very good poem and I can appreciate your allusion to Bukowski. I'm going to go peek at some more of your poems.
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Raynette Eitel
(9/30/2005 10:09:00 PM) |
Very well put, Lori. I really like this one.
Raynette
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