War - 25 (Haiku) Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

War - 25 (Haiku)

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War is a period

Initiating bravery through boiling blood

End with Paralyzing cowardice.

Thursday, August 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: humanity,war,war and peace,war memories,warfare
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rini Shibu 24 August 2017

Nothing gained at the end.. Good one Subhas

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 August 2017

End with Paralyzing cowardice.... this is the real figure of war. Beautifully penned.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 26 August 2017

War is a period Initiating bravery through boiling blood End with Paralyzing cowardice Nice haiku. War breeds cowardice at last. 10.

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Seema Sharma Rimi 25 August 2017

War is a period Initiating bravery through boiling blood End with Paralyzing cowardice. Yes, war has but a painful ending...bringing cowardice in stead of bravery. Beautiful. Thanks for sharing the haiku.10+++

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Sabita Sahoo 25 August 2017

War is a period Initiating bravery through boiling blood End with Paralyzing cowardice. Nice description. War ends up with cowardice. 10++

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Anita Aparajita Das 25 August 2017

War is a period Initiating bravery through boiling blood End with Paralyzing cowardice. Yes initiating with brave moments it ends up with a paralyzing phase..war must be avoided at all costs.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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