Water Of Life Poem by Sanjukta Nag

Water Of Life

Rating: 4.5


Let's break ourselves in each other's arms,
Like water breaks into water over and over
From one drop to several droplets
Then dust of water forms a new wave.
It has neither beginning nor end
A process goes life-long, maybe beyond it.
Glistening in the immortality of light,
They mingle, they collide
With each other, against each other
To finally offer themselves on the shore of life.
Let's form ourselves in each other's arms
And no one will be able to separate us,
Until death drowns in our water bodies
Like darkness falls into ocean.

Wednesday, October 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amitabho Sengupta 13 September 2018

Both the physical and the metaphysical aspects are the mainstreams to dive deep into the essence of being into togetherness now and beyond the boundary of mundane life. Noteworthy are the lines: A process goes life-long, maybe beyond it. Glistening in the immortality of light, .

0 0 Reply
M Asim Nehal 21 October 2015

Sensual poem, nicely written, Struggle of a lover who is In deep sea of love......................Loved it.10++++

1 0 Reply
Souren Mondal 21 October 2015

A really beautiful poem with very imaginative imagery.. I loved your use of water as a representative for lovers - being made of the same element yet perhaps different as water(s) are - somewhere it contains too much salt, somewhere it contains no salt whatsoever.. The ending with love sustaining all things and finally going down like the sun goes down at the horizon is a beautiful image.. A brilliant read.. Thanks for sharing :)

0 0 Reply
Shakil Ahmed 21 October 2015

great poem, your thoughts are amazing, well-penned, hanks for sharing.

0 0 Reply
Loke Kok Yee 21 October 2015

Great write on a lifelong bond Thanks-10

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success