My tears are like a waterfall
once I start I can't stop.
If only you knew,
What tis kind of sadness does to you.
A friendship lost,
or a tear in the heart.
when I cry,
It won't stop...just like a...
WATERFALL
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like the form and striucture of this poem. I read it as being two stanzas. A division there may have helped some. The length may be a little too long for the message and that may be the biggest flaw. The wording was good but unspectacular. Essentially it falls in the medium range. GW62