We Poem by Minnu Serah

We

Rating: 4.5


Played a little,
talked a little,
quarreled a lot
but I knew her,
she knew me,
she was me,
We are the same.
As we were together
our memories were the same.
She widened
my narrow corridors
with her smiling
eyes…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thomas Kurkoski 07 October 2008

An inner-struggle piece....fantastic...never change a word of it! ! Thomas

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Ashraful Musaddeq 23 September 2008

Yes we are like that! Lovely composition.10 for it.

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Kee Thampi 01 April 2008

the way we feel pain of words our memories were the same. She widened my narrow corridors with (a smile)

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K. V. Venkataramana 23 March 2008

There is something mystical about this poem. I like this poem.

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Maria Rose 20 March 2008

Transparent thoughts! The economy of words! Beautiful poem! love Maria

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