We Flowers Of The Sun Poem by Smoky Hoss

We Flowers Of The Sun

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The tiny bird
comes to peck patiently
at one sunflower seed.
Pausing briefly to ponder the sky,
the signs, the silhouette
of a large predator above,
seeking us,
the small shadows here below.
I too look up, scan the sky, and consider
meteors, rockets, acid rain.
Finding none in view,
I go back to sipping my coffee.
The fiery heat of the brew
allows for only one small swallow at a time.
The sunflower, I notice, also peers upward,
but it sees only one thing,
the ball of fire trekking east to west,
that it follows faithfully, no fear, no concern.
The tiny bird, finding it's fill,
spreads feathered wings of wonder
that glow gold in the perfect light
of this day.
It flies away to the harmony of trees
standing firm with open arms.
I swallow the final drop
of my own warm pleasure,
content.
For now fulfilled and at peace;
the grace of this day shines upon us, we
who are flowers of the sun.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 03 April 2023

Enjoyed reading this. Smoky, I always knew that you were a flower child!

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Denis Mair 03 April 2023

Sipping coffee gives you time to gather impressions, to put yourself into the landscape with the heliotropes and seed-gatherers. Nice vibe.

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Jayne Louise Davies 03 April 2023

What a wonderful poem x Loved reading it x

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 03 April 2023

Smoky this is brilliant especially how you described drinking coffee Encore! ! ! !

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M.J. Lemon 03 April 2023

Brilliant! This verse takes back about six summers to a day when a hummingbird visited me on the back porch. Our sunfllower took the place of one beanstalk in the garden by the garage....

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