Hats off to you Vinayak
You were a hero during life
Battling with muscular dystrophy
Took CBSC class 10 exam
But it was unfortunate that
Just after three papers
You succumbed. When results were out
People were amazed to find
Vinayak had obtained 293 marks
out of 300 in those 3 subjects
We will mourn a valuable life
An inspiring and promising one.
Nice dedication, Sadness, Sickness, Death! ! Student, Vinayak! ! ! May your soul rest in peace. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
An amazing poem Rajnish ji. Though Vinayak succumbed to his disease, it is only his body that perished. His spirit won. He left with success, courage and will power. An inspiring hero, indeed! ......10
Battling with muscular destroying disease is so sad. You have brought up a scene of sorrow in this poem. Thank you for sharing.
This poem deserves full rating and I have already voted 10 point to this poem. Thank you very much for sharing this lovely work....10
Vinayak was a hero during life. An inspiring and promising person he was. You have penned a brilliant emotional poem. Death shocks definitely. Thank you very much for sharing this lovely work.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Our heart goes to such unfortunate but brilliant people. Perhaps in the face of death certain abilities radiates all the more thru a determined mind. I appreciate your choice of topic to write about.