Weak Poem by lindsay rose

Weak

Rating: 5.0


when i see you
something happens to me
i cant walk
im weak in the neas

i cant breth
all i feel is my heart
its being ripped in in half
giving you the other part

now im lost in your eyes
theres was nothing i could do
youll always have the other half
ill forever belong to you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jen Capaldi 11 October 2009

a sad and heartfelt poem about love lost and longing. very nice write.10++ Jen

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