What Did I Do So Wrong Poem by tom Le Guilcher

What Did I Do So Wrong



The day we fell apart was the day i just broke apart
The day you said no more that was day i fell in soro

What ever did i do to hurt you so bad
was it because i was poor
was it because i was a fool
or was it just because you fell out with me

ill just say the day when you see me again just walk on by
you left me no choice to just break down and cry
you left me no choice but to do what i done

how come you never said i love you
how come you never said you cared
how come you just naver gave me the love
that you knew i lacked from you

never in my life did i feel so down and dissbelived
never in my life did so meny just stop and stear
never in my life did feel so alone a sceard

but now your gone i just try to move on
even now i want to know the ansers to my questions
wicth you just never said

i have grown stonger by and by
but however stong i get you just bring me back down

so now ill say bye for the last time
and leve you knowing i love you
but just remember that

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Corey Threet 28 April 2007

Yea I feel the same as Rebecca this poem is really good even tho I prefer rhyming poems this was really nice keep it up

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Rebecca Pring 03 April 2007

Wow.... I know exactally how you feel....that is... that is good. May need to work on rythm a bit but its good

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