What Falls First Poem by Susan Lacovara

What Falls First

Rating: 4.8


You fell into my tiny universe
My water globe of wishfulness
Much the way snow cascades
From the winter sky
Hardly noticeable
At first
Swirling like a song
Somewhere in the distance
Stalled
As if methodically searching
For a pleasant place to land
A flurry foregoing guidance
Floating
In delicate downfall
Simple soft and serene
Untouched and untangled
In the divine darkness of
Do Not Disturb
Do As You Please
Coating my landscape
In brilliant breathtaking beauty
A pristine path where no footsteps
Had yet broken or breached the stillness

But as always the seasons shift
The white moundings muddy
The ground swallows that which melts
Before our very eyes

Saturday, September 2, 2017
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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
09/02/17) Moments, like snowflakes, come with lightness and beauty that cannot be captured nor contained. For he, who once warmed my winter...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jeanette Telusma 04 September 2017

I enjoyed reading this poem. A wonderful write, thanks for sharing.

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Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken 02 September 2017

Beautiful poem Susan Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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Pratik Rajani 02 September 2017

great one check out my poem sun and planet..

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Anita Aparajita Das 02 September 2017

Coating my landscape In brilliant breathtaking beauty A pristine path where no footsteps Had yet broken or breached the stillness Nice lines dear poet..keep it up. 10++

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