_what I Say_ Poem by Brayden Barratt

_what I Say_



I say things wrong.
I do it all the time
I don't always mean what I say.
but I do mean it when I say
I love you,
I love you a lot.
And I'm sorry,
I'm sorry I mess everything up.
But I promise you
I promise I wont hurt you,
wont hurt you intentionally.
I dont know what to say
around you I never know what to say
Your amazing
Your personality is amazing and thats what makes you
Beautiful
Beautiful in my mind.
So I know I messup what I say
and I do it all the time
but your amazing
and beautiful so
Listen to my words
and please give me
a sliver of a chance
if not a little more.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

nicely done, i like the repetition throughout the poem... knowing who you wrote it for it makes much more sense. i can feel your emotion throughout this poem because i know you as a person. If i had not met you then this is what i would say, nicely written, gotta work on it a lil more. i know you a beginner and all so no worries. i love the way you write. cant wait to see you go into more depth.

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