What's Wrong Poem by Darlyn Rose Villarosa

What's Wrong



I never thought I could finally love someone
When I’m with him I just can be myself
I love the feeling that his arms wrapped around me
While he kiss me passionately
And softly whisper the words I long for everyday

I never showed anyone the real me
He has the power to convince me to be me
Somehow I feel he loves me deeply
But why I feel some uncertainty that the love I found is not for me

Do I love him?
And yet my answer will always be “YES”
He’s everything I need and dream to be with
I just love the way he changed my life
And I’m in heaven just thinking of him right now…

Is it me?
Why don’t I trust myself when he’s around?
Why can’t I surrender everything to him?
Why can’t I open myself completely to him?
What’s wrong with me?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I think it all boils down to different seasons in our life. This was from the heart. Keep writing.

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Robyn Selters 22 May 2010

We all go through things like this at times... There can be many reasons. Sometimes we are not seeing the whole picture, and sometimes we have wounds that need time...: -)

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Darlyn Rose Villarosa

Darlyn Rose Villarosa

Calapan City, Oriental Mindoro
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