When God Created Man Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

When God Created Man

Rating: 5.0


Let there be no limit to man's kingdom,
Working up a new lump He took a pause,
Reflected on his new venturous cause,
Wonder what he'd do with wit and wisdom!

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Today if told man might feel it unfair,
But God had had a hunch and inkling rare.
Given his tact man an utmost height spies
Whilst his inanity reaching a pitch,
But seldom still high ‘nough to realise
Wither goes he— devil, deep sea, or ditch!
His wisdom vouchsafing ways otherwise,
His follies, frailties reaching stratosphere
Where dangles before him a tempting prize,
But would God have any patience to spare!
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Sonnets | 10.08.13 |

Tuesday, October 1, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: creation,god,warning
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When God created man He must have hoped he would use his intellect with wisdom and discretion. This sonnet wonders if He is disappointed with the way man has gone about his ways, and if He is at His wit's end and has lost all His patience.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 October 2019

A wonderful and perceptive poem. How can our great Creator be happy with men who want to take His place. The world is full.of hatred and greediness. God, probably has lost His patience. A well thought and conveyed write, Sir.

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 October 2019

Thank you poet Rose Marie for thinking alike

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Kostas Lagos 01 October 2019

Nicely written! 10!

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Aniruddha Pathak 01 October 2019

Thank you dear Kostas for the compliment and rating.

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