Treasure Island

Cristina Teodor

(18.11.1973 / Romania)

When I Feel The Rain I Live


Outside it's raining and i'm watching at my window,
In silence of the world, only the dance of rain i could feel,
My thoughts are in torment of questions and answers,
Only the rain knows what i need.

Rain falls gradually in the rhythm of my thoughts,
I feel it's wrapping my pain,
The voice of rain calming my senses,
When my heart is rushing to beat.

I'm watching rain from window,
The cold drops are touching the thirsty ground,
My soul is the same as the soil,
It needs love as much the soil needs rain.

I'm walking in cold rain,
Like crystal pearls are falling from the sky,
When touching my skin it's like magic,
I feel my soul light and released of pain.

I'm listening the music of the rain drops,
And on this music i am dancing, speeding around,
With my arms wide open touching rain drops,
Rain is caressing me with its voice and touch.

I adore rain, it's all my sould wanted,
Caressing me, awaking life in me,
When i feel the rain and listen to its rhythm,
I wish to live again, again, again.

Submitted: Saturday, September 22, 2012

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  • Prasanna Kumari (9/22/2012 6:20:00 AM)

    the magical moments of rain captured very well with your words wrapped in human feelings....good poem (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (9/22/2012 6:13:00 AM)

    Lovely, it really a nice feeling when we watching over the raindrops..i like the poem as i really felt it here, the rain and the blessing sky tears_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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