When I Said Goodbye To You Poem by Kali Abyss

When I Said Goodbye To You

Rating: 5.0


Was not like any other day,
The sky was suddenly clouded,
And though I was strong, I couldn't say
To you farwell, to you farwell...

Did you notice the tear in my cheek?
...My heart growing dim?
Did you notice the sadness in my eyes...
The moment when I said to you 'Goodbye'?

To the people, all around us,
Was like any other day.
Two strangers shaking hands.
Me, in the train...You, in a plane...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynn Glover 01 August 2009

A very sad departing. Good rythem and structure. Loved it. Lynn

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