When I Think Of Daddy Poem by YeseniaLi Garcia

When I Think Of Daddy



When i think of daddy
i listen 2 his favorite music
close my eyes nd sing along
try not 2 think of him being gone

When i think of daddy
i walk down da streets
asking God for peace

When i think of daddy
i stare in the mirror hoping
to see his face

When i think of daddy
no matter how long it takes
i bring him back
even for a moment

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nia Riz 27 January 2009

the poem was really good and interesting...but i feel poets shouldnt change the beautiful english language and its spelling! ...so it might be better if you made it proper

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~ Jon London ~ 13 January 2009

such a heart felt touch to this poem....deeply written and composed...this was written with tears....lovely thanks for sharing Jon

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