When My Musics On Poem by Nalaysia vizcarrondo

When My Musics On

Rating: 5.0


When i'm listing to my music,
i'm in a totally differently world.,
all my pain goes away,
i may cry,
scream,
i might even yell,
but guess who really deserves my opinion?
me,
my music helps me get through the day.,
it calms me down,
if there's no music near.
if can't hear anything.
there's going to be hell,
i won't control it,
i can't,
i won't try to.,
my musics the only thing that i can say that really helps me.,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
No Ones Bidness 30 July 2011

I really enjoyed reading your poems because they really relate to me specially this one

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Denise Sarabia 28 July 2011

hi! I'm just wondering why you used '., ' in almost every end of the lines.. does it mean something? or just simply your style?

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