Mohammed AlBalushi

Rookie - 65 Points (5/2/1973 / Muscat- Oman)

When The Sky Become Dark - Poem by Mohammed AlBalushi

When the sky become dark
The moon left with stars
I will not worry cause u with me
your eyes shine and make the light
Bright every where
So I will not worry if the sun hide
your arms make me worm
If the world come small
I will not worry your heart is my home
If all left me alone
I will not worry cause your my friend

Comments about When The Sky Become Dark by Mohammed AlBalushi

  • Rookie Ershad Mazumder (10/13/2008 11:51:00 AM)

    Very good theme and expression. Read it repeatedly and edit further. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (10/13/2008 11:29:00 AM)

    very nice........u should replace all the coz with cause...its poetry...not sms...well done (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 23, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, October 13, 2008

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