When We're Old And Done Poem by Kamiel Choi

When We're Old And Done

Rating: 5.0


When we're old and done

How will our love feel? Will we be

Anxious, afraid we missed out on

What we could have done? Afraid of

Looking back and feeling like dry sand?


Life seems funny and meaningful when the people

Around us are younger and we, unwittingly

We become authorities on living

They say that we know how it is done

We say we must curtail our consciousness

Give it up for raw being.


They thank us

For our presence at the table.

Sunday, June 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship,love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 17 June 2018

Kamiel, such a well penned poem...10+++++

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