Where Are You Poem by viv ...

Where Are You

Rating: 5.0


took my pen and started to write
words in my mind began to fight
opened my eyes and looked all around
a few I couldn't, a few things I found

I found the table and my old couch
the curtains, the wallpaper, my medicine pouch
the T.V. turned silent and my cell-phone without your name
broken hearts, tormented souls and one selfish game

I found the roads and the lovely woods
my loneliness and my swinging moods
your memories, your illusions, just not you
I miss you so, for god's sake..where are you? ? ? ?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danny H 11 July 2009

This is an amazing poem extremely creative and unique in starting off the poem instead of a rant about how much you miss the person it was an amazing write: 10+

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