Where Is My Mind? Poem by Soren Valentine

Where Is My Mind?

Rating: 4.0


Where is my mind?
Where has it gone?
Like a leaf pushed by wind,
it has traveled the earth.

It has become a part of the hated,
and now makes it a part of me.
Do I deserve to die under a December moon?
O mist! Cover me forever.

O tombstone of mine, do you now wither?
Weeping willows, receive me with open arms!
A shadow that died has sprung to life,
and now he's back to claim his haunt.

I'm sick of saying sorry,
repeating, repeating in my head.
My mind, trivial is its story.
You must be sick and I dead.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Caroline Bulleck 03 October 2012

You have excellent word choice, imagery, flow, ryme scheme and message. It held my attention and I liked it very much. I give it a rating of 8.

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Poet Dragon 26 September 2012

Some compulsions exit, and some never stray the mind is only living if you feed it every day.

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