Whisper Poem by Day Williams

Whisper

Rating: 2.8


Whisper across the centuries
To men with noble hearts and minds,
Who know the power found in love
To open eyes of men born blind.

A man is but a blade of grass:
Let him stand straight, with dignity,
Let him reflect the Light above,
And share in God's eternity.

Saturday, June 17, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: dignity,god,healing,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jefferson Carter 17 June 2017

Day, sweet sentiments, but it takes more than that to make a good poem. If you want to improve, maybe immerse yourself in some contemporary poetry (Billy Collins? Mary Oliver?) if you have time, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me how you like it. Thanks! Yrs, JC

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Day Williams

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Fresno, California
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