So vain is man's mime.
In a vast ocean of time
Small whirl as in sea,
A brown leaf blown off a tree,
Never once so prime!
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Senryu |26.09.2019|
" So is with this man." ....this line is fully co- related with the previous six Haikus of the series you have cutely inscribed which are read by me. All the haikus have the same theme. In vast ocean of time, man is a tiny whirl that is unnoticedly disappeared or a brown leaf on tree fled away soon by the wind. Thank you dear Pathak sir for your unique series of Haikus related with life and philosophy. I appreciate the way of presentation.10
Thanks dear KM for your kind indulgence which I appreciate so much.
A wonderful work on identity lost! Well penned sir......10
Thank you Dr Swain for reading and giving such wonderful comments.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
who cares to notice? ........Brilliant. Thank u. anjandev roy.
Thank you dear Anjandev Roy