Who Cares To Notice-7? Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Who Cares To Notice-7?

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So vain is man's mime.
In a vast ocean of time
Small whirl as in sea,
A brown leaf blown off a tree,
Never once so prime!
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Senryu |26.09.2019|

Saturday, September 21, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: identity,lost
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 22 September 2019

who cares to notice? ........Brilliant. Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 September 2019

Thank you dear Anjandev Roy

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 September 2019

" So is with this man." ....this line is fully co- related with the previous six Haikus of the series you have cutely inscribed which are read by me. All the haikus have the same theme. In vast ocean of time, man is a tiny whirl that is unnoticedly disappeared or a brown leaf on tree fled away soon by the wind. Thank you dear Pathak sir for your unique series of Haikus related with life and philosophy. I appreciate the way of presentation.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 September 2019

Thanks dear KM for your kind indulgence which I appreciate so much.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 September 2019

A wonderful work on identity lost! Well penned sir......10

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Aniruddha Pathak 22 September 2019

Thank you Dr Swain for reading and giving such wonderful comments.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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