Treasure Island

Noah Body


Who cares - untitled


For a couple days I flew high
Up there at the edge of the sky

Now on this day of love and joy
I am dead like a broken toy

A fake smile pasted on my face
Of the beast it shows no trace

A black contagion that poisons all
Stuffed behind a steel clad wall

Too bright laughter of the kids
Stark contrast what the evil bids

Must remove myself from this world
Before the rot comes unfurled

Nothing but a disease filled blot
Smeared across the love they've got

Submitted: Tuesday, December 25, 2012

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  • Bri Edwards (7/14/2014 7:58:00 PM)

    gee, no-a-body, it took a while for me to figure out you are (tony karas) and find this comment, below, by me, for which you sent me an explanatory message. THANKS for answering my question. :) bri (Report) Reply

  • Bri Edwards (7/10/2014 2:17:00 PM)

    dark! is this your life or did you make it up? bipolar or some other 'problem'? OR over-imaginative (if there is such a thing) ?

    thanks for sharing, and particularly for the rhymes. :) bri (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (12/31/2012 6:26:00 AM)

    No one cares if yourself never care....love start with self and it created spaces for others to stay, so care yourself and sure people will love to care yours...Happy New Year Tony, leave the past years of blacken days to a new brighter days of greater wishes and hope_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (12/27/2012 4:16:00 PM)

    To share this is great. You have described these feelings well. Don't forget all the beautiful in your life, (Report) Reply

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