I am humbled here that is a fact
Such wonders here contained
To b granted the privilege
Of reading and experiencing
The works and emotions
So enchantingly expressed
I fear my dark writings
Do not belong
Among such wonderous prose
Shameful they are
The temptation to remove them
And find someplace else to keep them
Where they shall be hidden
I am embarrassed to leave them here
Amazingly awesome authors here thrive
Draw such wonderful pictures
Elicit intense emotions
Sometimes over powering
I could browse forever
If only madness and life
Would not intrude
We shall enjoy reading your work as much as we enjoy reading everyone else here, so welcome to Poemhunter and keep that pen moving!
like a sea of stock, ready to expose in the dungeon of great escape....you have made my day....so challenging to pursue, a stamina of rich uranium ready to make a bomb, thank you for the lines you share... Kudus my friend... God bless
PS. I am trying to rate this yet as happens often is not allowing. Better for me I have saved this to my favourite.
This is truly inspiring and you do not know what you are giving to others. thank you so much,
I saw a TV advert once that was so encouraging. A young woman is watching a ship come in. She is waiting for her best friend to arrive. When the young woman who has just stepped off the boat turns in the young woman's arms, you see the same face. Her friend is herself. I feel that about your poems. They show you care about yourself. As a poet and as a person who has suffered from schizophrenia, I applaud your gutsy poetry.
Words from your heart are wonderful, what more could a reader wish for, most of us feel humble when we read others work, I know I do, keep writing and sharing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
To me, a poem is freedom of your soul and mind to speak about things. You dont have to feel bad if they are awesome, i know i feel that too..but yours are sincerely from heart, we dont ask for fans to adore our work, we dont ask people to reading ours each time we post the poems, we just telling the side of our life, our smiles, our cries, our time and life, all around...that's a poetry got inside the words...yours are fine...sharing days in dark it's okay but we will make our writing to lead a life thinking when we do it even more if we reading it...a special thing about poetry_Soul