Who Makes You Smile Poem by Locura Alaam

Who Makes You Smile

Rating: 4.5


She dances, and the feet lightly tread
The wind flirts with her light blue dress
Displaying such exquisite finesse
Though motionless, so far from dead
Pleases the eye with a tender sight
A soothing sigh, so soft and light
Her dark hair teasing the breeze
The caress of the air, gentle, with ease
As it carries with it the phrase 'My dear'
And all the elements of the scene
Seem to merge and not intervene
'Who Makes You Smile, my dear? '

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A poem I wrote inspired by a picture I came across of a girl in the middle of what seems like a forest, I guess. She had a blue dress on and there were trees around her basically; I really liked the picture and thought of writing a poem describing it.
I hope the poem draws a good clear-enough image of how I saw that picture.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rachel Streek 21 July 2012

Great poem. Really really like it

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