Will Poem by Barry Middleton

Will

Rating: 5.0


free will is a great pretense
a grand deceit
as if our petty choices
turning left instead of right
choosing chicken instead of beef
marrying for money or for love
add up to some golden award
some trophy of wisdom
and grace

in fact we fall through life
like a boulder from a mountain
barging and banging our way
veering this way and that
by gravity and chance
our every plan may find defeat
and every dream retreats
like desert sand
blown by the wind

Will
Sunday, December 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: fate
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 20 December 2016

Goes straight to my favorite's list. Deep insight and vision you have. Very impressive work. A question we all ponder...do we have a choice or are we the puppets of fate. Very philosophical write. A super 10.

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Barry Middleton 20 December 2016

I think we have choices but we overvalue our wisdom and our choices often take us on failed journeys. In some ways luck is more important than choice.

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Paul Brookes 18 December 2016

Great piece I loved the metaphor 'like a boulder from a mountain barging and banging our way' we are just part of chaos theory well penned sir

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Barry Middleton 18 December 2016

Chaos Theory - good book. Thanks for the comment Paul.

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