Will this work?
I don't know,
It's breaking my heart,
not to be sure.
I tell you I love you,
and you say ok.
I don't know what to do,
do you believe what i say?
I wanna make you happy,
I want you to smile.
I want you to feel what i feel
every once and a while.
Your my dream come true,
and i love you so.
But will this work out,
I just don't know.
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This is the hard part. Can it be made to work. Unfortunately, sometimes it can't. This is well expressed in your writing. Well done. GW62