Will This Work? Poem by xera mclaughlin

Will This Work?



Will this work?
I don't know,
It's breaking my heart,
not to be sure.
I tell you I love you,
and you say ok.
I don't know what to do,
do you believe what i say?
I wanna make you happy,
I want you to smile.
I want you to feel what i feel
every once and a while.
Your my dream come true,
and i love you so.
But will this work out,
I just don't know.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 05 February 2009

This is the hard part. Can it be made to work. Unfortunately, sometimes it can't. This is well expressed in your writing. Well done. GW62

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