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winter

this winter am not home
winter at home meant
a sweet chat
hot wih grandmas love
winter at home
was a huge hug from akku
the sun of my life
winter at home
was a kiss from aysh
the star of our core
and winter at home
was a long
night with her
under the roof of
dreams and smiles
of joy and
love
this winter am not home
and the winter goes on and on......

Submitted: Monday, January 05, 2009


Comments about this poem (winter by abdul nassar palliyal )

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  • Sandhya S N (7/8/2009 4:56:00 AM)

    very touching words of hopes and despire
    regards
    sandhya

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  • Mel Vincent Basconcillo (4/20/2009 5:33:00 AM)

    u write with your heart and that is truly amazing

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  • Aiswarya. T.anish (1/7/2009 10:17:00 AM)

    Heartfelt poem. Keep writing

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