Tommy Stroller

Rookie - 146 Points (30.6.48 / Lincoln)

Winter Haiku - Poem by Tommy Stroller

Haiku 1

Summer is so short

A white skirt left on the beach

Winter is so long

Haiku 2

The ice flowers on

the window pane. A flute plays

and the rising moon

Haiku 3

The seagull on its

perch pole above the water

Naked we slowly enter

Haiku 4

Porpoises leap and

breathe in the sound. The sauna

sweat on our bodies

Haiku 5

Long the shore the ice

cracks in the ferry`s wake. The

moon slides on darkness

Haiku 6

New Year - so many

rockets scream next day - old year's

rubbish fills the streets

Form: haiku

Comments about Winter Haiku by Tommy Stroller

  • Rookie - 115 Points Zed Undead (9/9/2014 8:38:00 PM)

    I liked it! wonderful imagery i definitely want an e-book.... (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 36,460 Points * Sunprincess * (7/9/2014 9:29:00 AM)

    .............a white skirt left on the beach....beautiful imagery... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,689 Points Herbert Guitang (4/28/2014 8:01:00 AM)

    amazing kind of haiku 'bout winter, LIKE (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 11, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 16, 2014

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