Winter Romance Poem by Susan Lacovara

Winter Romance

Rating: 5.0


Let's stay up all night
and listen to the dark...
Just you and I
huddled in the whisper of winter

Uninterrupted and blanketed
by the steady snowfall of softness
Outside the iced over world
knows nothing of our dreams
Let's keep this moment
all to ourselves

Like elves, busy at work
concentrating on every little detail
of what makes us tick...in time,
with one another

We can lie frozen together
cozy and calmed
by the rhythm of pelting ice
So nice, so nice
quietly strolling into slumber
with you

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(12/14/13) Safe from the storm...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 30 December 2013

What a wonderful poem you have posted here, right in time, it's Winter here too! Your poem is heart stirring, body warming alright! 'Just you and I huddled in the whisper of winter' -Ah! 'Outside the iced over world knows nothing of our dreams Let's keep this moment all to ourselves' -Cold outside, warm inside, aha! 'We can lie frozen together cozy and calmed by the rhythm of pelting ice So nice, so nice quietly strolling into slumber with you' So nice, so nice, Susan, you get a ten from me! Warm greetings for a very happy 2014!

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Shaun William Hayes 30 December 2013

Oh I get that feeling; two souls in their intimate bubble, the world outside, in both senses. You invoke happy memories Susan, thank you.

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Freezing with the heat of romance!

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C. P. Sharma 18 December 2013

romantic passions run high in winter, lol. It's winter here too. .

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