Wishes Adrift On A Beach Poem by Aniruddha Pathak
Wishes Adrift On A Beach
Some wishes reach
A ripe old age,
And still remain virgin,
Some might get fulfilled nigh young,
But most remain for long hung,
Left to age in hope of some green,
It's sin to keep wishes in cage,
Or leave adrift on a beach.
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Musings |29.12.18 |
A ripe old age! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Sin we should avoid and virtue we should adopt. A ripen old age reflects amazing thought. This poem is brilliantly penned. Thank you very much for sharing this lovely poem.
Yes, as long as wishes are wishes it is sin to keep them in cage. Thank you Kumarmani Mahakul.
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5/5/2024 8:36:23 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A brilliant poem full of wisdom and with a meaningful message. Wishes in life must be pursued no matter what. For if it is left on its own, life is aimless and wanders without soul. Very well crafted and executed write.
I liked your expression wishes wandering without soul, thank you Rose Marie.