With My Young Ones Poem by Jaishree Nair

With My Young Ones

Rating: 5.0


Feeling excited and alive...
Off to meet my children!
After four months of separation...
Eyes bright with anticipation.

A month of celebration;
No pressure, No tension;
Holidaying with my children...
Each moment to capture and treasure.

I was received at the airport;
And ushered home like a queen;
Delicious dishes awaited me there-
Served by my young ones.

Vying with one another
My son and his wife....
To make me comfortable;
Little realising their presence alone
Is enough to pleasure my heart.

She was more than a daughter...
A welcome addition to our family.
The space filled by her presence.....
Trying to perfect the role of a home maker.

Considerate and caring...
Compromising and comprehending her nature..
Her cheerfulness and laughter contagious.
Justifying all the roles bestowed on her.

My son with many goodness inborn;
Though impulsive and hasty his nature;
Gullible but lovable to the core;
Priorities to relationships several...


My place on a pedestal in his heart;
Never refused me anything;
Careful to substantiate luxuries;
His heart overflowing with love
Hidden and sealed in his soul.

Both work loaded...
Profession demanded their time.
Amused to watch how seconds count
In their morning routine schedule...
To reach their office on time.

Blessed Iam to be a part of their life!
A family Iam proud to call my own!
Praying to shower HIS mercy infinite
To continue this journey of love together.....
Till doomsday do us part........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 22 April 2015

repeated advice made no difference, true, thanks.

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Bharati Nayak 11 March 2016

A love filled home is really blessed.A beautiful write on your blissful family, thnks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 11 September 2015

After four months of separation... Eyes bright with anticipation. Holidaying with my children... Each moment to capture and treasure. value of the presence of the loved ones... cheer, compromise, egoless, selfless, Praying to shower HIS mercy infinite such a joy you express and give the reader a sense of the real and ideal family. thank you very much God bless.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 April 2015

Deep expression of love towards son. Nicely and aptly presented. Beautiful poem I like most. Many thanks.

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Melissa Tamayo 26 April 2015

Beautiful way to describe the love for your son. I can relate to this poem because I have two sons. I worry how they will end up.. Thanks for sharing

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 24 April 2015

A mother's love, concerns and happiness beautifully described!

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