Without You Poem by Pirate Love Magic Man

Without You

Rating: 5.0


Nothing is the same anymore,
The sun dose not shine as it did before.
Without you
My heart gets lost into the day,
My thoughts search for why you ranaway.
Without you
The wind dose not speak,
These lonely nights my eyes start to leak.
Without you
The pain crushes it's way to the bone,
My beautiful love I wish you was home.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 27 October 2009

Without you everything is [-] ive With you everything is [+++] ive. Excellent poem………… Ten+++ Ms. Nivedita UK Please read my Poems: Why Hack My She [In Elite 500] Enigmatic Navel or others. niv

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Tai Chi Italy 24 October 2009

Wishes are fishes, so cast out your net dear Pirate! Lovely rhyme on loving, so true, nothing is the same again. We just have to live with the pain or do something about it. Find your love again. Smiling at you Tai

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Stacey Watts 24 October 2009

Very beautiful heartfelt piece. I hope things will look up for you soon. Excellent piece.

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