Words Build Bridges Comments

Atma is supreme! No bridges over it...only deception!

a well composed and crafted piece of work

I agree with Sandra F the last 2 lines are beautiful....and you're not the only one inspired by her beautiful poem....do read my own titled 'Paper Birds'

A poem certainly from the heart of a life of building bridges with words of wisdom and this poem has just that...soothing like a flake of snow++10 regards

Eternity, through our minds’ prism Rachel Ann Butler

As you did in a comment on one of my poems you do again, wonderfully, here. What a pleasure to read this beautiful work that flows on from Sandra's grand piece. Two marvelous wordsmiths, at thier best, complimenting each other using words on the wings of paper birds to bridge the miles between them.----10

a lovely poem on a beautiful poem....very well done sir...these bridges are everlasting

words build bridges over soul........> true! fine phrasology! 10+

ok, , , words build bridges but brains hold the words...so nice ur poem dear...

I am privileged to know that 'Paper Birds' has inspired such a beautiful poem. Your last lines are exceptional. I wish I had written them. Take care. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra

How true my friend we need others to validate our very existence. To share thoughts with likeminded people is a privilege

Though the paper birds now fly bit slow Messages are soothing as flakes of snow ............................. Lovely verse..

words do build bridges great poem 10

Yes, one cannot get satisfaction alone unless one shares what one has with others. Poetry, paper bird and snow flakes of messages are good images! Solution for the problem is answered in my poem, A Get Together and hope it will be interesting to you and all readers, I believe!