Write Out Loud Poem by avani chomal

Write Out Loud

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I give you a pen and paper, write out your heart on it,
Let it be tough, though it will help you indeed,

Tear it, fight it with your words,
So that it calms you in the midst of the worse,

I give u pen and paper to rub off your problems in writing,
To the talks and hurdles which are hard hitting,

Lend me the paper of the emotions once of your life,
I promise this aggression will never be left further for any sacrifice.

Friday, December 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: lifespan
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 25 January 2017

Nicely portrayed. The pent up feelings which have often tormented the heart, should have an outlet. It is always comforting to express one's mind than to suppress. Lovely poem. Thanks.

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Bharati Nayak 23 December 2016

Writing down the oppressive emotions through creative expressions is cathartic and can heal one's bruised heart.A nicely penned poem.Thanks for sharing.

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Siddartha Montik 14 December 2016

Is very need of putting emotion on paper.. and spill it all! ! Let God read it and understand.. loved this expression as a need! Thanks for sharing your emotion.10++!

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