Violet Winters

Rookie - 93 Points (September 13 / Baltimore, MD)

Writer's Block - Poem by Violet Winters

I wanted to write
for you tonight
but I can't think of what to say.
The days are getting longer,
the nights are getting harder,
the distance is feeling farther
and we're not getting stronger.
In fact, I've no hopes
that one day,
you'll stay.
I don't miss you so much
as I did before;
I can't picture my sons with
your eyes anymore.
I don't hold my breath
when I see a white pick up
and peer through the glass
of the driver's side door
hoping to find
you there.


Comments about Writer's Block by Violet Winters

  • Silver Star - 3,189 Points Clarence Prince (8/14/2014 7:53:00 AM)

    Sad, but still a lovey poem! There is hope, keep the faith, Violet! Blessings to you! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 8,943 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/5/2014 12:32:00 PM)

    The poet is experiencing writer's block, still she has produced a very nice poem.
    I have a poem on similar subject, titled 'Poetic Stagnation'. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 31, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, August 1, 2014


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