@ You @ Poem by Menime Soul

@ You @

Rating: 2.7


I feel your presence as my thoughts go way, way deep..
I walk along the forest trail and silently i weep.

As i find the right direction to make a good connection,
I stumble upon a problem as my life is not complete.

The elements leave me windswept like the well-worn sands of time,
The hourglass is running slowly to the day that you are mine.

I bind my love to you once more as i take another step,
If i could see more clearly i would not be such a wreck.

My heart bleeds with such passion as my soul cries out for you,
But i shared my secrets with the trees as it was only those that knew.

How strong my faith is for you when you have a troubled soul,
I cannot see you left behind to let things reach their toll.

For through the dark mists of confusion i know it's worth the wait,
Because the sun will be shining brightly as happiness is our fate.

I make my vow with promise, as i know just what is due...
For i shall never let you down my love, for i know just what is true.

I feel your presence as my thoughts go way, way deep..
I walk along the forest trail and silently i weep.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
young writer Athira 19 December 2009

''our sweetest songs are those that tell of saddest thoughts'' these are the words of the great poet PB shelley this poem is the perfect example.......great work..........

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