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Taca Dawkins


You and I


In the process of
Growing and seeking
A person's presents of
Love and a cheerful mind
You comfort my heart
Strengthen my soul
By surrounded me with
Greater joy If we could
Spend time in a cool
And quite surrounding
What a joyousness day it
Would be
You walk away
My darkness
So we share
Our love into lightness
you led me to things
Which is the best and
I am leading with my
knowledge and experience of
More and more happiness
I gain great pleasure
And understanding of Your thoughts
You whispered love to me
And nothing about vanity
You are the most pleasant being
To me in humanity
The best on most exquisite
thing in this world
Doth cant be seen nor
even be touched
But most be felt
with the heart
And should never be
apart
Love more than friends
once your loved
Love from the start
And love without a end

Submitted: Thursday, September 19, 2013
Edited: Thursday, September 19, 2013

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In the beinging of my and your relationship is everything form doth first day, there will never be a end within love

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