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david kush

(December 24 / south bend indiana)

You Can't


You can't see me crying
When I'm standing in the rain
You can't see my heart ache
Or feel my pain
So don't say you love me
Unless your're next to me
Waiting to catch me
When I fall
I tried of all the loneliness
The lies you're telling me
The hope of being loved
Is destroying me
So you can't be the one
I've waited for
So listen for the door
To slam
As i'm walking out the door

Submitted: Monday, February 11, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, February 20, 2013
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