(December 24 / south bend indiana)

What do you think this poem is about?

You Can't

You can't see me crying
When I'm standing in the rain
You can't see my heart ache
Or feel my pain
So don't say you love me
Unless your're next to me
Waiting to catch me
When I fall
I tried of all the loneliness
The lies you're telling me
The hope of being loved
Is destroying me
So you can't be the one
I've waited for
So listen for the door
To slam
As i'm walking out the door

Submitted: Monday, February 11, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, February 20, 2013


Comments about this poem (You Can't by david kush )

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  • Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (2/19/2013 11:34:00 PM)

    The hope of being loved
    Is destroying me
    when people say something and do opposite we may feel this way!

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