You Don'T Care Poem by Tonya Kincheloe

You Don'T Care

Rating: 4.5


I want to show you my wrist.
But you'll just turn away.
You can't see the blood on my shirt.
Because you don't care anymore.
I've always been lost.
But you never tried to find me.
I tried to tell you to take the knife.
But you didn't hear me.
Because you don't care.
You can't hear me at all.
Because you don't want to.
Because you hate me.
I cut my wrist.
You can't see I'm in pain.
Because you don't care.
You don't care if I'm in pain.
You don't care if I die.
You just don't care.
And I know it.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

you know i used to be a saint, going around preaching about how god can save and help us through. but you know im losing my faith. i know how you feel cuz this poem is how i feel today and have felt for the past three years of my life.

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Serenity Prayer 10 August 2008

this person may not care, but God does.

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Greenwolfe 1962 24 July 2008

I feel about this one, the way I do the lasst one. I really can't say one is better but I do want to remindf the writer that the shorter the writing is, the more impact each word has and generally the more memorable the writing. GW62

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Tonya Kincheloe

Tonya Kincheloe

rogers, arkansas
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