You'Re Not Here Poem by jan fuentez

You'Re Not Here

Rating: 5.0


If you’re not here
I don’t know how to linger
Such hopes of eternity to be with you forever
I can’t manage to go on my life
And I can’t accept this heavy strife

Why did you leave me in love with you
Will you stop clinging my mind, please do
Let me set my own freedom to embrace
No matter how difficult, I will face

jan fuentez

11: 47 A.M., Friday
September 11,2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 15 June 2010

a talking poem...good composition...natural rhyming...10

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