You Walk Alone Poem by Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA

You Walk Alone

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Alone you come and alone you go,
In lonely crowd you do not know.
Growing with life you get the path,
In wisdom water daily have a bath.

Temporary thing you get in cheer,
In happiness, passes year after year.
Dear soul you travel distance so far,
This gap is like far ground and star.

Relationship has built family tome,
You do not know what does roam.
Wonderful Earth is a birth further,
You are stranger, you are observer.

Along with others you are alone,
In strange garden you have grown.
In lonely crowd you do not know,
Alone you come and alone you go.

© Bhargabi Dei Mahakul,28 August 2015. All rights reserved.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem is written on 28 August 2015 and dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 02 May 2017

Growing with life! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 06 October 2016

picture of Lulu Villegas-Rojas xDeep and beautiful.....wow. Great job! 28 Aug 2015 by Lulu Villegas-Rojas | Reply picture of..... xSo much wisdom in this piece. I loke the line you are stranger, you are observer I think we all feel that way at times. Thank you for sharing. 28 Aug 2015 by..... | Reply picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x............very beautiful....love the flow and rhythm.....and so true, we walk alone, this is deep and thought provoking...an excellent write ★ 29 Aug 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of Ramin Ara xNice job, Bhargabi. 29 Aug 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply picture of Elena S(*_*) xExcellent poem, natural flow of beauty deep and wise, thank you for sharing, wonderful wisdom! 29 Aug 2015 by Elena S(*_*) | Reply picture of Karin Anderson xI very much admire your rhyming couplets and your philosophy of being alone, and thank you for sharing with me Bhargabi. 29 Aug 2015 by Karin Anderson | Reply picture of Jane Taylor Hardy xBeautiful spirituality and philosophy contained in this lovely piece. I just read your bio....I admire the work you have done in education. 29 Aug 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xSo very true, alone each of us feel at times yet we know God is always with us, your ink is so wonderful I love your poems and the rhymes too! ! ! Blessings darling xoxoxo xoxoxo xoxoxo 30 Aug 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of M. H. C. xA wise, insightful and beautifully written piece! :) Life is transient. Alone indeed but we need not be also lonely if we follow the path of of justice, love and compassion. Love is the way. :) P.S. - - Much respect to you for your accomplised dedication to education. :) 31 Aug 2015 by M. H. C. | Reply Note: These comments are received through poetfreak.

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Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
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