You Won't Go Amiss Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion

You Won't Go Amiss

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G-o amiss you will not,
E-ighth November early day;
M-orning light will guide you,
M-ist and haze fade.
A-way.

U-nderneath the blue sky,
Y-ou aim for glorious bliss;
S-taying strong in faith,
I-n life you won't go
A-miss.

Wednesday, November 9, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: birthday
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 09 November 2016

Very promising, and hope giving poem. I notice something great in your poems - I always see date mentioned. Thank you for sharing.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 November 2016

Thanks again, Zwelethu, for the comment... I have found a unique way of greeting my friends on their birthday through acrostic name.....

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