Your whispers I heard
Even though in a crowd
From your sorrows of silence
Rose my song of love
I flew past you
Like zephyr so gentle
But you heard not my groans
Cos youre lost in your world
The crimson of the wines
From the goblets you have
To thee I swear
From the depths of my heart
There shall not be another
Another Majnu
Like how thou art
Anjali
17-01-2010
am in turmoil am in distress may no longer want to carry on for my life is just a boring mess what my hope if not thy promise the promise of the promising meeting.....
Two souls in tune and the music is beautiful.10/10.Anjali. Love, Sandra
Beautiful start to this poem to hold the reader who cannot let go you are the perfect wordsmith forging even wonderful whispers ++10 regards
lovely i enjoyéd it thank u invite u to send ur precious comments on my poems too
'like zephyr so gentle' your words always touch me and it stays timeless... 10++++ clicked but it didnt appear becoz of techno problem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a beautifully expressed write my lovely, your words blended with the narrative tone really does lift this piece to a whole new level.....Stunning work sweetheart........Lovely to be back reading your works again my friend.