Treasure Island

ANJALI SINHA


* YOUR WHISPERS *


Your whispers I heard
Even though in a crowd
From your sorrows of silence
Rose my song of love
I flew past you
Like zephyr so gentle
But you heard not my groans
Cos youre lost in your world

The crimson of the wines
From the goblets you have
To thee I swear
From the depths of my heart
There shall not be another
Another Majnu
Like how thou art

Anjali
17-01-2010

Submitted: Sunday, January 17, 2010

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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (3/25/2010 2:26:00 PM)

    'like zephyr so gentle' your words always touch me and it stays timeless...
    10++++ clicked but it didnt appear becoz of techno problem. (Report) Reply

  • Gautam Sen (3/7/2010 5:20:00 AM)

    I just took a chance to read any of your poems and it was my choice. I've gone for a right choice. This poem is too good to touch and penetrate a heart whom the expressions are meant.
    Last line is so nice....
    I swear
    From the depths of my heart
    There shall not be another
    Another Majnu
    Like how thou art

    I enjoyed the poem.

    Gautam (Report) Reply

  • Siddharth Singh (3/3/2010 1:38:00 AM)

    A vote of appreciation for one of a kind majnu.
    His whispers you heard from which rose the song of your love.
    Mission accomplished for you, dear majnu.
    Fascinating indeed Anju. (Report) Reply

  • Nikunj Sharma (1/29/2010 3:37:00 AM)

    not a majnu like him
    and a laila like you
    the cup's full to the brim
    and the love seems true
    may god bless the laila and majnu.... (Report) Reply

  • Dr.Sanjib Das (1/22/2010 10:25:00 AM)

    LIKE JOHN DONNE, YOU CREATE A HARMONY BETWEEN TWO HEARTS.
    AGAIN YOU SHOW YOUR UNIQUE QUALITY AND I GIVE YOU 10/10. (Report) Reply

  • Ken E Hall (1/22/2010 3:12:00 AM)

    Beautiful start to this poem to hold the reader who cannot let go
    you are the perfect wordsmith forging even wonderful whispers ++10
    regards (Report) Reply

  • anurag duggal (1/21/2010 7:58:00 AM)

    am in turmoil
    am in distress
    may no longer want to carry on
    for my life is just a boring mess
    what my hope if not thy promise
    the promise of the promising meeting..... (Report) Reply

  • ~ Jon London ~ (1/21/2010 7:47:00 AM)

    This is a beautifully expressed write my lovely, your words blended with the narrative tone really does lift this piece to a whole new level.....Stunning work sweetheart........Lovely to be back reading your works again my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Sadiqullah Khan (1/20/2010 7:23:00 AM)

    What Did Ye Know

    The one knowing not the secrete
    How shall then the beloved of self
    Didst to the sun did point the finger
    Didst someone told what night was like
    What desert of love was like what thirst meant
    What wine was when her eyes were goblet
    When risen was the moon to sunset
    When prayer was on the stone step of that door
    Reciting the only chant was her name
    Let the compass of my life be the eyes
    Let the one be like the halo silver
    Of colors that the dreams to dare
    Nay the narrations visions are seen
    Who on love has bidden life dear
    Who then no one shall know his love
    Majnun not then what did ye know

    .............You have written a lovely poem. I take it to my fav list.10 and much more for you. (Report) Reply

  • Dr Hitesh Sheth (1/18/2010 10:10:00 AM)

    There are whispers divine
    in mind's jungle of trees and vines
    that speaks gently, as gentle zephyr
    to the man rolling in wordly mire
    tune your mind to that unearthly voice
    and surely your soul would start to rejoice.....a good write...10+++.... (Report) Reply

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