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Atef Ayadi

Zone two: my touchey toooochi down touch chi tchi betci chi down...

what bothers

errr is not your

i am talking to myself!


you o


ass ho el el ooo el

my way ass yo oooooo el

hollllll ooolllLLLL

not yooooo

ey way eay ey youi

yo iiiii am facted f p poooossi iiiirrrl rish is

i do not know


i am

where are you

i the planet
or where you want
should and sell shell shale amd

want to be....

i do not where


i am going to be....

i felt it.....

the trans fo f o
eau ef eau
if iii oooooooooo fer foooo



between galaxies....

and i afraid

can met chet achat fi frrenca

fransha sa uas

uasa could be

better then comming to this f king jail

called ob bama


met with mr
ben ali

wants to understand



un policier

de soussa

mizen mezien



ho uriia

horra aaaa aaa

yes raaaaaeh ehhhh eah eh eev g eah eaaaah

ma man ma ma

ob aaaaa ma


mia mia

will change

a thing

from what is


what up gays

big buildeing build it ing it

backs we go to fixe it...

i need time with and shale and shella enshella mishs

eh ah mihalla shallla mishell

and the kidsss

comeone one one touch themn, , , , , i will bckai lob laboriotiy him in

going to bel tam o bai prison

amrican shit

to loose

my confort zonnne zooune june


el berd

el karis is isss no ass
no moneee iiiii iiiii eesss

Submitted: Saturday, January 09, 2010

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